מה יותר פנאן מדוגמה למשימת כתיבה 1 ב IELTS אקדמי? אני לא יודע, אבל אני כן יודע שאני מחזיר את המילה פנאן לשימוש כי היא פנאן.
בכלללל מקרה, הנה bar chart המציג את שיעורי הפעילות הגופנית בקרב גברים ונשים אוסטרלים בשנת 2010 לפי קבוצות גיל. הדוגמה למטה כתובה במבנה הסטנדרטי של משימת כתיבה 1 ב IELTS: פתיחה - כללי - פרטים - פרטים. בשתי פסקאות הפרטים הלכתי על חלוקה לפסקת גברים פסקת נשים כדי שהרבי לא יכעס. טוב, הנה הדוגמה.
The graph gives information about physical activity rate in Australian men and women of various ages in the year 2010.
Overall, women were more active than men in all age groups except for the youngest. The most active group was women aged 45 - 54, and the least active group was men in the ages 35 - 44. Generally younger and older women were more active than middle aged women, while the opposite was true for men.
Women became more active between the ages of 15 - 24, in which less than 48% of women were active, and 45 - 54, in which over 53% of women were active. Later in life, women reduced their level of activity - only 47% of elderly women aged 65 and over were still active.
On the other hand, men reduced their level of activity from nearly 53% of 15 - 24 year olds to only 39.5% in the 35 - 44 age group. Later on, men increased their activity through middle age and old age - nearly 47% of elderly men were still active, a level close to that of women in the same age group.
